Please Critic This Ordinary Pic Of Mine. Total results: 28 Pages: 1 | 2 [ 2] |
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 ID: 183878 Posts: 984 | Date: 2007-06-26 14:34 The color seems way too red, the size is very small so that other detail can't
be seen. If your original is larger just resize it down to about 800 pixels
vertical or horizontal. If it is off a print you may need to rescan.If I haven't been there, I'm still planning on going!
If I haven't done it, I've still got time to try! |
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 ID: 188950 Posts: 94 | Date: 2007-06-26 14:50 ohh please critic mine too |
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ID: 183878 Posts: 984 | Date: 2007-06-27 03:19 Actually, quite interesting with the color bit faded in at the candy. Still, the
date stamp would have been better turned off. It detracts.
Overall, it suffers from the wide-angle effect of a small camera shot close to
the subject, better to use the longest lens setting. It is a good concept, but
needed pre-planning.
Yet, it still shows your remarkable beauty.If I haven't been there, I'm still planning on going!
If I haven't done it, I've still got time to try! |
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ID: 188950 Posts: 94 | Date: 2007-06-28 13:27 oh thanks Charles for the critic. and thank you for last
sentence |
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 ID: 186175 Posts: 71 | Date: 2007-06-28 17:35 The first picture is too small to make a proper judgement, at the moment it
looks a bit too red. |
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 ID: 197309 Posts: 36 | Date: 2007-07-01 23:46 thank you, guys for the critic. anyway, i dont know how to post that picture
bigger. =/"Our hearts are drunk with a beauty our eyes could never see."  |
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 ID: 200579 Posts: 5 | Date: 2007-07-17 01:16 Audra S.:
ohh please critic mine too
this one's not bad at all... there're programs out there you can use to edit the
pic in such a way that the color is really just limited to a specific object..
because in this case, you also got some color on your hands... it would look so
much better like that.. also, you can make the red a little brighter so that it
really really stands out.. finally, maybe an adjustment to the ISO settings so
that the picture isn't too grainy. |
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| Date: 2007-07-17 03:21 Clarisse Marie Christine King Sevilla:
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dont know how to post that picture bigger. =/
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 ID: 199345 Posts: 390 | Date: 2007-07-17 05:48 Rick, the picture you have of Stacey is really good, very good. The image has
nice composition, excellent sharp focus on the face, especially the eyes and
nice soft focus on the background. The model has a nice pose and expression.
However, the image you just posted has very little of the above qualities. If
you are going solely for a headshot then you need to determine what it is you
are trying to portray. I would like to see the eyes in sharp focus, as the
viewer is draw to them. However, when the model is wearing sunglasses you lose
this point of focus. The image leaves me uncertain of what you trying to show. |
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ID: 199345 Posts: 390 | Date: 2007-07-17 05:50 apologies I thought it was Rick that made the post.
Clarisse see Ricks picture. This is what you should strive for |
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 ID: 183517 Posts: 16 | Date: 2007-07-17 06:29 And wahat do you think obout this one? |
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| Date: 2007-07-17 07:57 Mike Jones:
apologies I thought it was
Rick that made the post. No problem.
And thanks for the thumbs-up on my picture of Stacey  |
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ID: 199345 Posts: 390 | Date: 2007-07-17 19:15 Santa P.:
And what do you think about this one?
I'd say the photog did a nice job. However, the model looks bored. It's not a
pose or expression that grabs the attention. The image comes across as flat. see
the facial section of this link for a further definition of flat.
http://www.squidoo.com/modelingtips/ |
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ID: 188950 Posts: 94 | Date: 2007-08-18 12:56 please critic |
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| Date: 2007-08-18 13:11 Audra S.:
please critic
I think this one is Nice! Fun & Natural Audra! The Blue Dress photo at your
portfolio is far the best of you here!
Best wishes from
MIKE! |
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ID: 188950 Posts: 94 | Date: 2007-08-18 13:23 thanks Mike |
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| Date: 2007-08-18 21:04 Audra S.:
thanks Mike
No probs Audra! you should ask Mike jones or if he is snowed under then one of
our other photographer friends here to look at that pic with teddy that you have
on portfolio, they may be able to sharpen it up Audra! Alternatively maybe you
should change that one for a sharper one that will show you clearer and complete
your portfolio pics!
Best wishes
MIKE! |
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ID: 188950 Posts: 94 | Date: 2007-08-19 15:51 i changed that one whith taddy to that crazy |
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| Date: 2007-08-19 16:09 Clarisse Marie Christine King Sevilla:
**getting ready for your critics**
Say everything you wanna say.. just be honest, please. 
Uhmm.. remember, it really is just an ordinary pic.
It's not a VTR or anything.
Again, just say anything about it, ok?
too small to see anything |
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