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 ID: 218518 Posts: 21 | Date: 2007-12-17 01:07 heya guys i just got into the modelling buiseness and i really wanna improve !!i
would really appreciate if you would look at my portfolio pics
!!!!!!!!!!!xXx -love me or hate me its still an obsession! |
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 ID: 183878 Posts: 1184 | Date: 2007-12-17 16:09 You are a lovely and wicked child. (I'm referring to your comment on someone
else's photos). These shots in the gold dress are fairly nice. They show
possibilities. You will need to work hard, however, and eat right and keep your
body toned--and hope for those few extra inches to come your way that will allow
you to fulfill your potential.
Don't neglect your schooling, because you'll need all your math and
communications skills, too. The word in your logo should be spelled "obsession."If I haven't been there, I'm still planning on going!
If I haven't done it, I've still got time to try! |
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ID: 218518 Posts: 21 | Date: 2007-12-17 16:35 thanx for the advice i have been doing all that and i have already lost 5 kilos
my dietition says its a bit unhealthy for a tall girl to way so little and thanx
for the correcton!!i am good in school straight A's in math bt not in englishxXx -love me or hate me its still an obsession! |
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 ID: 182744 Posts: 1748 | Date: 2007-12-17 17:58 Ok. You can start eating again. Bulimic and toned are two different things.
Charles didn't tell you to starve yourself.  Fairly unhealthy
for a teen to be losing weight.
I might have commented before, but I was a bit afraid of your sass. You don't
pull punches, do you? Remind me to duck.
You seem to have the interesting ability to change your apparent age with a
look, pose or make-up. Good. that set you up for a larger variety of work. Even
in the same outfit you managed to change ages.
A decent variety of expressions...also good.
Maybe some of your expressions are a little beyond your years? 
Picture entitled "Gabriella T": Good eye contact, good posture and angles. Just
a tuft of underlining showing by your right armpit. That's one for the editors.
Bit scary, though, the underlying language of that shot. You're how old? 12???
Cool um down afore you invite the wrong critters. But very nice. Shows you can
pose in a manner that speaks to people.
"2006 shot" is a bit cluttered but the composition issue is not your problem.
Set director or photographer. Again, you are expressive and your are even
breathing properly, through your lips to give them fullness and motion. Causes a
more unforced facial expression. Make up applied to age you to Prom Queen
status. Face is a little burned out...tog problem, not yours. Otherwise an
attractive picture.
Tempted to get a board and straighten out your broken back on "Modelshoot dec
2007" but other wise OK. Again, good camera location awareness. You seem to know
exactly which part of the lens to look at to make eye contact with your
audience.
"Dec 2007" is a better look at the 'broken back' in a more acceptable scene.
Instead of broken back, you are looking back. Better effect. Shoes are too big
and your are standing pigeon toed. Watch that. Of course, if you stop eating,
calcium depletion and other vitamin deficiencies will insure they stay bent
inwards. Additional tip: In bare feet if you tend to get red marks from prior
shoes or just standing (such as can be seen on the back of your ankles) make up
can be applied to return your ankles to your natural skin tone. Ice your feet
too after a long shoot. Keeps them from swelling too much.
"Modelshoot 2007 dec" Never been fond of shots that make one look like they have
a scoliosis. Pushes your belly out. I like your facial expression least on this
one, mostly because combine with you hand buried somewhere beneath the fluffs of
your dress I get the impression you got caught tugging out a ship stuck in the
harbor. (To translate for the foreign audience...yanking underwear from betwix
the butt cheeks.)
Over all you are doing outstanding for someone so young. I can only say "Keep up
the good work". (And if you dare post a webcam pic I will sic Charles on
you!)
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 ID: 199345 Posts: 391 | Date: 2007-12-17 19:06 Gabriella,
These are a great start. I agree with all the positive comments above so wont
bother to duplicate them. My only constructive criticism is that your eyes look
a little flat to me. Maybe you were a little nervous or apprehensive, maybe the
tog needed to add a catch-light to them. I am interested to know how you felt
during the shoot and also how you feel during your next one and then compare
whether there are any differences.
Regards Mike |
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