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 ID: 26159 Posts: 12 | Date: 2008-01-15 08:56 if anyone would like to comment and critique come of my pics. please feel free.
I will appreciate it. You can even vote.
Thanx |
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| Date: 2008-01-15 11:02 I'll comment... nice smile and great rack.
Now I'll wait for Riely to see this and smack me... hard... I like it HARD!!!
Seriously though, this pic seems alright.
Romeo. |
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 ID: 199345 Posts: 391 | Date: 2008-01-15 11:32 Ramona,
As you are already semi-pro I'm sure you are not asking this question in order
to be showered in compliments. All your images are pretty good, so I'll keep my
critique to just the things that I think would have enhanced the image.
First of all the one you attached to the post. Overall nice composition,
although the colours looks a bit washed out. The main issues I see are that your
eyes do not stand out enough. Maybe you are squinting or maybe the make up is
too dark or both. The viewer is looking to the eyes for your emotion and it's
difficult to see them here. Secondly your smile is a little to strong/wide imo.
It creates too severe lines and shadows from you nose to the outside of your
mouth. I'm not sure if this is a natural smile or posed one but it looks over
done. You body looks great btw. I point this out here because I'll refer to this
pic later on.
Beach: Same outfit and make up as above, but a much better shot. Eyes are sharp
and wide open. I would have liked the camera a little lower or head a little
higher in order to see your eyes just a little bit more. Composition, pose,
lighting etc all spot on. Probably the best shot in your port.
1st B&W: Beautiful mood, expression, lighting, pose. I'm just not in love with
the composition. I see that the tog is trying to think outside the box by moving
you half out of frame, but it doesn't work for me. Looks like you have just run
straight into a wall.
Up against the white fence: Beautiful dress, make up. Colours a little dull,
there needs to be some colour that pops. Main criticism is that your pose is a
bit boring. Arms are straight and hanging, Would preferred to see them more
bent. The slight arch in lower back is good.
2nd b&W: The viewers eyes are always drawn to the brightest object in the
picture. In this case it is the white bow. They now need to be drawn towards
your eyes (which also need to be bright) instead I find my eyes drawn towards
the white dots around your belly. This is where I want to refer back to the
bikini shot, you have good abs, but here the lines caused by the dots make you
look like you have a belly. The composition and the clothing make you look short
and wide.
White top, black belt: I really don't have anything bad to say about this image.
I like the bright green in the background, gives that pop of colour that seems
to be missing in some of the other pics. I'd say it's equally the best alongside
the Beach shot.
The Video: I have to admit it made me laugh. Through no fault of your own. It
seemed like it was a cheesey take off of an advert. I expected some sort of
funny caption at the end. But you looked good in it and performed exactly as
required. I can't say the same for the male actor.
All pics seem to have you wearing blacks and whites. Try to find some
complimentary colours to add some variety.
Hope some of that helps.
Regards Mike |
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 ID: 224481 Posts: 7 | Date: 2008-01-15 14:25 Hi Ramona, I found the best pic to be #2.. black and white.. because it came the
closest to showing inside emotions.. which you need to show a bit more. Great
look overall, body and face.. where are your eyes?
Part of the problem is the same in all photos.. I think the monitor screen on
yours, or on your photographers computer needs a bit of calibration... so now,
there are more shadows than should be, not enough contrast and a lack of color..
but these things are technical and easily fixed..
Try some work with head shots and looking at alot of them.. your body is fine..
it's just along for the ride.
Good luck to you, J |
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 ID: 204767 Posts: 105 | Date: 2008-01-15 15:01 hi Ramona, i agree with James
i think ur best pic is the 2nd pic. But all the others are really nice too.
Keep it up. |
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ID: 26159 Posts: 12 | Date: 2008-01-15 15:26 Thank you all for your comments and your advice.
It was really helpful to hear all your comments and see what i can improve. It
seems that i need to find a better photographer and i need to show more
emotions. I will work on that. If you know any good photographer in Europe or in
the UAE please let me know.
Thank you Romeo, Mike, James and Ahmad.
The fashion industry is my life although i study something completely different.
I am planning to improve and take this seriously. I love what i am doing.
Where are you guys all from? I always see you chatting here
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ID: 199345 Posts: 391 | Date: 2008-01-15 21:11 Ramona,
That last pic is exactly what I was talking about when I said the tog needed to
lower the camera so we could see more of the eyes. The eyes are striking. They
draw the viewer in. This is the best shot I have seen from you so far.
Mike |
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ID: 26159 Posts: 12 | Date: 2008-01-16 11:00 Thank you for your comments. You have really helped me to understand how photos
should be like and what is important in a photo.
I love that pic as well. It's my favorite one.
thanx Mike |
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 ID: 213967 Posts: 52 | Date: 2008-08-24 14:26 Hi Ramona
i like your black and white .
we like to see more good work from you in future ,
Good Luck  Idolsofnet.com |
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| Date: 2008-07-20 14:30 Hi Ramona,
I'm from the USA. I know an excellent photographer that focuses on just your
eyes. He does travel a lot. He is on the site Model Mayhem and his name is
Manish. Let me know if you are interested and I can find out when he is
traveling again. I love all of your photos BTW!!
Giana |
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 ID: 246345 Posts: 517 | Date: 2008-07-20 15:15 U'r beautiful, with a nice smile and U'r photos are really great. Congratulation |
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 ID: 237093 Posts: 1360 | Date: 2008-07-20 15:33 Model mayhem is full of scammer photographers & agents
and Manish has been blacklisted by the way |
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| Date: 2008-07-20 17:12 I guess it's just another Manish Monday.... |
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ID: 237093 Posts: 1360 | Date: 2008-07-20 17:32 Greg Sir:
I guess it's just another Manish Monday....
Manic Manish Monday! |
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ID: 237093 Posts: 1360 | Date: 2008-07-20 17:35 The photographer Giana H. is on about, with a name like Manish he's definately
at least a crook if not some sort of all out scammer!
Mean.... man-ish - made up name without a doubt
Don't trust someone like that! |
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ID: 26159 Posts: 12 | Date: 2008-08-25 05:42 so which photographer is good? ) |
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 ID: 251478 Posts: 2 | Date: 2008-08-25 23:42 Hi Ramona, u look nice in these pics but why don't u look into the camera as it
shows more confidence like in the pic attached below.And yea ur 2nd pic is good
one. Keep up good work & best of luck. |
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ID: 26159 Posts: 12 | Date: 2008-09-02 14:55 ok Atif. Thanx for the advice.
i have great new... i'll be on the cover of Arabian Travel soon!!!!!!!!
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ID: 237093 Posts: 1360 | Date: 2008-09-02 15:00 Ramona Feraru:
ok Atif. Thanx for the advice.
i have great new... i'll be on the cover of Arabian Travel soon!!!!!!!!
Knock 'em dead with your looks Ramona
You're gorgeous babe but you can do far better than the geek that's in the photo
with you |
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 ID: 197529 Posts: 3 | Date: 2008-09-02 16:00 Gary Young:
Model mayhem is full of scammer photographers & agents
and Manish has been blacklisted by the way
Oh wow i didnt
know model mayhem was full of scammers, all of the profiles looks so real
any ways, you are AMAZING in your pictures
Keep on livin' |
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