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 ID: 207451 Posts: 33 | Date: 2008-01-15 16:18 new pis added would any feedback from any of you wise people out there! |
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 ID: 213967 Posts: 51 | Date: 2008-01-15 23:04 hi Grace
its looking more perfect.
to improving Day by day ,
Good Luck for your future 
PinkeshIdolsofnet.com
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 ID: 199345 Posts: 391 | Date: 2008-01-16 06:30 Hi Grace,
At first I didn't see any new pics, but then realised that you have some glamour
in a photoset.
pics 1. This is the best imo. It good to see you stepping out of your comfort
zone and add variety to your port. I like the concept. The setup works well with
the dark background. The framing a half length is perfect as we get to see your
expression which is very natural. The pose is good especially the right hand
squashing the breast. I'm not sure what is in your left hand, looks like an
elephant condom.  It probably have worked better if you were just holding the
other breast, ie mirroring the right hand. I would lose the ring too, the
shininess of it catches the eye and assuming that was not the intent then it
would be better without it. Overall this is one of the best pics I have seen
from you.
pic 2. I don't like it. Not having seen pic 1. Mouth looks strange, it's not a
smile or a pout. I/m not sure what the expression is meant to portray. It looks
like you've been to the dentist and had an injection in it and lost all control.
 I assume you included it because you like the way the make up has run and the
hair is all wet. I like the idea, I just don't like the expression.
pic 3. This one doesn't really work for me. I'm not feeling the emotion coming
across. Maybe the eyes are not drawing the viewer in. I don't get the feeling
you are looking at me as if to say you want me. Which is the whole purpose of
this kind of shot. You are supposed to be enticing and that starts with the
eyes.
pic 4: Much better. Eyes are looking straight at me and I get drawn in to them.
This one works perfectly. Hopefully you can see the difference and next time
you'll be able to reproduce this look. One note is that the poses in 3 and 4 are
identical. You'll need to start looking for more positions of you arms. There
are loads of books on posing, get one and start practicing.
It's nice to see someone progressing as you are. Every time you come back with
new images they are getting better and better. My criticisms are getting
harsher, but they are intended to push you further.
I really like what you created in pic 1.
Good Job
Regards Mike |
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ID: 207451 Posts: 33 | Date: 2008-01-16 15:43 cheers mike, thanks for the advice I shall take it on bored. Hope to have more
images soon from the same shoot so ill probably put a few more up then |
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 ID: 162309 Posts: 37 | Date: 2008-01-21 16:26 Grace,
not sure which photos you're seeking input on, but i'll take a shot of all i see
on your profile page, ok?
the black and white profile photo is easily the best one on the set.
now for the colour ones.
are you shooting all of these with the same focal length? all telephoto?
try shooting with different focal lengths... 35mm, 80mm,200mm, (based on 35mm
format)...
you will notice a difference.
i am assuming you shot all those photos with the same lense which is why your
features are similar in "flattening".
i am quite certain that the lense you used for the black and white profile photo
is perharps shorter than the one(s) you used for the colour set.
try shooting more with that particular focal length, as it does better for
you.
i hope i explained it well. if you 're still not sure what i am trying to get
at,
email if you like, and i will go into more details.
my point is, as i find with most of my modeling portfolio shoots,
most of us look much better at a certain focal length. (especially in my case,
lol..
see photo attached)
even the most gazelle looking model can add weight if you use a telephoto too
much.
which is why i use extreme telephoto only for ramp shots, never mostly for
portfolios.
not unless you get a very very VERY skinny model 
i hope you understand what i am driving at.
good luck, and hope this helps.
mtp
I SHOOT PEOPLE FOR FUN AND MONEYyou provide the character, and i will take care of the rest to capture your persona. |
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