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Dante Vega
Dante Vega
ID: 245208
Posts: 92
Date: 2008-06-19 15:59
Tell me what you think and please vote?
Dante' A V

Anatoly Jaldin
Anatoly Jaldin
ID: 190489
Posts: 57
Date: 2008-06-20 11:38
The one with the girl in a black dress ; I like the work on her but maybe overworked the background,regards.

Dante Vega
Dante Vega
ID: 245208
Posts: 92
Date: 2008-06-20 11:48
Your criticism is greatly appreciated.
Dante' A V

Gary Young
Gary Young
ID: 237093
Posts: 1799
Date: 2008-06-20 12:24
Before and after 4 shows a huge improvement, the girl's face looked a bit on the green tinted side in the before, maybe just needs a little nudge down on the gamma correction & compensate it with slight brightness/contrast ajustment a little to make the background look a little more like natural eye view...
it's a huge improvement though:thumbup:
:cool:

Bree F.
Bree F.
ID: 226125
Posts: 15
Date: 2008-06-20 18:32
i love the forth one..her eyes just pop out at you..but yea the background is too stark now..maybe do what gary said! lol i dont know what to do coz im not as talented as you obviously are!

Dante Vega
Dante Vega
ID: 245208
Posts: 92
Date: 2008-06-20 19:44
well I had the background normal but I wanted to see if i could get her to stand out from the rest of the photos that people take without effecting her beauty. This was the outcome I think it looks a little like looking at her photo through a HDTV or something like that.
Dante' A V

Dante Vega
Dante Vega
ID: 245208
Posts: 92
Date: 2008-06-20 20:10
Gary Young & Bree F.:


Gary Young

Before and after 4 shows a huge improvement, the girl's face looked a bit on the green tinted side in the before, maybe just needs a little nudge down on the gamma correction & compensate it with slight brightness/contrast ajustment a little to make the background look a little more like natural eye view...
it's a huge improvement though:thumbup:

Bree F.

i love the forth one..her eyes just pop out at you..but yea the background is too stark now..maybe do what gary said! lol i dont know what to do coz im not as talented as you obviously are!



I am all about the critics and working with the critics. That being side I hope you like this one better.
Dante' A V

Dante Vega
Dante Vega
ID: 245208
Posts: 92
Date: 2008-06-20 20:39
The other thing with the green face is not so much of the picture but the monitor you may be looking on. No two monitors are calibrated the same and that may be what is causing a gamma on the face. I am not sure but I will look into that further. I didn't see any green in her face on my laptop.
Dante' A V

Dante Vega
Dante Vega
ID: 245208
Posts: 92
Date: 2008-06-20 21:16
Hey there Alex I do think that you have point but please stop being so high toned. I want to have people read about critics point of view about my new line of photos. if you want to dispute something then please I'd rather you two do it through Message.

and by the way High Toned is just my way of saying don't be so blunt. It tends to strike up anger and animosity.
Dante' A V

Gary Young
Gary Young
ID: 237093
Posts: 1799
Date: 2008-06-20 23:43
I've got a couple of foreign trips arranged, I'm thinking when I come back to upgrade not only membership here but put pro status on too & open up another one for my other work that fits in with what jurgita is about, but till then I'm just gonna leave it as it is!

The photo's of me in order, the 3rd one of me was my sister that took it:doh:
and Anna's not pro:shh: but the other 3 were me myself, and the cybershot camers used wasn't on the biggest picture setting:cantlook:

Here's one of me, taken on auto, cropped by me:thumbup:
:cool:

Gary Young
Gary Young
ID: 237093
Posts: 1799
Date: 2008-06-20 23:45
Dante Vega:

[Gary Young & Bree F.: ...]

I am all about the critics and working with the critics. That being side I hope you like this one better.

The original one looked a little greenish tinted but the fixed up version made her look more natural:thumbup:
:cool:

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Date: 2008-06-20 23:54
Gary Young:

I've got a couple of foreign trips arranged, I'm thinking when I come back to upgrade not only membership here but put pro status on too & open up another one for my other work that fits in with what jurgita is about, but till then I'm just gonna leave it as it is!

The photo's of me in order, the 3rd one of me was my sister that took it:doh:
and Anna's not pro:shh: but the other 3 were me myself, and the cybershot camers used wasn't on the biggest picture setting:cantlook:

Here's one of me, taken on auto, cropped by me:thumbup:


Cool! if I can still respond without dante giving me the teen lecture!

fotocolor by H. Valladares
fotocolor by H. Valladares
ID: 220576
Posts: 100
Date: 2008-07-01 07:15
Dude, have you calibrated your monitor?
All your photos show some kind of color cast, looks like you are working in a low resolution CRT monitor.

Nathan Hill Photography
Nathan Hill Photography
ID: 190390
Posts: 77
Date: 2008-07-03 07:34
It may be my monitor but a lot of the images looked a bit green, I did like what you did and it made a huge difference in the images.

Excellent work

Mike Jones
Mike Jones
ID: 199345
Posts: 391
Date: 2008-07-13 14:54
Your improvements were fine, maybe too much cyan in some of the skin tones but overall a vast improvement. What I can't understand is how the originals were so bad in the first place. They all seemed to lack a huge amount of contrast. I don't know of even any entry level slr that would produce images like that. It almost appears that they were "fixed" before they were fixed.

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