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David Leeworthy
David Leeworthy
ID: 247404
Posts: 151
Date: 2008-07-03 07:56
I took these last week. My friend started a clothing design company last yeat and is now selling her product from her home. She asked me to take photos from her lineups. So here we go. Please dont critisize to bad. This is really my first attempt at phtographing people as the main subject.

David Leeworthy
David Leeworthy
ID: 247404
Posts: 151
Date: 2008-07-03 08:00
lets try this again. Pics were too big.

David Leeworthy
David Leeworthy
ID: 247404
Posts: 151
Date: 2008-07-03 08:00
and the other one.

FashionEspana
FashionEspana
ID: 229135
Posts: 12
Date: 2008-07-03 10:07
Nice image David but I feel that you could have done better with the backgrounds - i.e. in choosing more contrasting & complementary colours. Just feel that the dress kind of merge into the background too much rather than stand out.
Hope this helps and keep up the good work.

Kim S.
Kim S.
ID: 223398
Posts: 537
Date: 2008-07-03 11:06
I love the pics but the first one the model with the hat on has her face hidden
Kimberley :)

David Leeworthy
David Leeworthy
ID: 247404
Posts: 151
Date: 2008-07-03 11:18
haha yes Kim. It took a lot of enticing to have kristen even be in the pictures!!

Kim S.
Kim S.
ID: 223398
Posts: 537
Date: 2008-07-03 11:35
oh ic but your second pic really turned out well
Kimberley :)

fotocolor by H. Valladares
fotocolor by H. Valladares
ID: 220576
Posts: 95
Date: 2008-07-03 17:46
FashionEspana:

Nice image David but I feel that you could have done better with the backgrounds - i.e. in choosing more contrasting & complementary colours. Just feel that the dress kind of merge into the background too much rather than stand out.
Hope this helps and keep up the good work.


I liked the second photo a lot, but I agree with the above comment, I would have used the max aperture possible cuz the background is quite distracting, that and a reflector to bounce some light back into the shadows to the left of the photo, then again that's just being picky.
The model is beautiful by the way.
Keep up the good work.
H.
Not the best of my photoshop skills showing, but it gives u a general idea ;)

David Leeworthy
David Leeworthy
ID: 247404
Posts: 151
Date: 2008-07-04 05:22
Very cool. I see what you mean though. It really make her "pop" a lot more.

Kim S.
Kim S.
ID: 223398
Posts: 537
Date: 2008-07-04 05:25
fotocolor by H. Valladares:

[FashionEspana: ...]

I liked the second photo a lot, but I agree with the above comment, I would have used the max aperture possible cuz the background is quite distracting, that and a reflector to bounce some light back into the shadows to the left of the photo, then again that's just being picky.
The model is beautiful by the way.
Keep up the good work.
H.
Not the best of my photoshop skills showing, but it gives u a general idea ;)



i like the edited photo it looks nice
Kimberley :)

fotocolor by H. Valladares
fotocolor by H. Valladares
ID: 220576
Posts: 95
Date: 2008-07-06 13:08
Thanks Kim!

Mike Jones
Mike Jones
ID: 199345
Posts: 391
Date: 2008-07-13 14:35
I am glad to see that you finally got round to posting some images that are model related and not rodeos.

I think the first image is too cheesy. The big smiles are too big. The model on the left, definitely you need to work with her more, she outshines the other model by far imo. Both are nice looking but work with the short girl more and you will get some stunning images.

The image against the tree is alright. Like others have said get your dof down. Good use of shadows and diffused light though. The pose is a little amateur, but I assume that this was her first shoot. You probably need to guide them a bit more.

Elena Marin
Elena Marin
ID: 246345
Posts: 601
Date: 2008-07-13 14:56
Nice pictures, but U can better. Anyway U have nice models, and a great view;)
:lips::saint::lips:

Charles Griffin
Charles Griffin
ID: 183878
Posts: 1175
Date: 2008-07-18 22:36
You do need to watch the background. Don't be afraid of directing the models. Chin slightly up would have improved the first shot for girl in hat.

When it is for commercial purposes, the models are there to show the product off. You can create a theme, like sports wear or summer wear on the farm, but you still have to get as much of the product on display as possible. The adjustment to the second shot made it more a "catalog" shot and that is what you should be going for.
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